He gets on stage, spits and the crowd is silent as a praying monk lemme offer some help
N force feed him sweets, chocolate chips, a bunch of junk so you can be full of yourself
Mega vs You? No need to warn me Civils handing out money to boast n ill tourney,
While this pussys so scared he’s handing out money to protect himself from me.
It’s a shame to see such a broke man walkin it must but the liquor talking,
but if you see him beggin for change he’s not backin up Obamas campaign slogan.


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Mega your verse wasn't too good dude, but it wasn't because you lacked concepts, you have a fresh mind and you can think up concepts which is good, but now you have to work on wording them into harder hitting punches. Look at the punches I thought were good and try and make all of yours like that, and work on your rhymescheme too and take more time on your verse, i can tell this was done really fast.

Fly E you need to quit stretching your punches so long like that, it makes the verse look ugly. Also work on your rhyme scheme, keep it up though man you'll be elevating in no time.

v/Mega

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