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Old 03-08-09, 06:13 PM   #18
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I'm going to vote on this one honestly, so no bitching guys...

Bobericc
I'm stopping your mental, drop full potential, I'm fucking insisting
my punches are hitting.. but you without 'me' is nothing but Misis..
nah you had to remove letters to make the wordplay, and it still wasnt good -1
sunning a bitch when muscle head thinks his bars are polished off..
this dumb hater gets the punch breakers like mortal kombat blocks!
nah this didn't connect -1
feeding these lines of short spars, this student aint seeing me
mims your not smart, I seen your report card... it said Deedede..
this was really wack -1
rapping secretly, since 04 you've built some rep on the internet
how he's got half the jump on his dick, and aint even win one yet
ok this was good +1
you little bitch! so I went to the hall of names and it isn't right
nick called your originality aggressive..explaining that you didn't bite!
I see what you tried to do here, but it wasn't hard, 0
your an animal, I can't understand it though, your seeming fake
a lonely geek, the only beast in hibernation 12 seasons straight
lol this was nice yo +1
spitting heated flames, battling vets, but your verse played bitch
whole life is irony, like I smack you to death with a first aid kit
lol yea this was cool too, +1
the worst fakeness, fuck your ego, your bars are booty bastard
check your confidence, and know the meaning of over-enthusiastic
this wasnt good but wasnt bad, 0
truly ass kid... so fuck 80-0, and concepts from generic bitches
your best battle's are crazy sets of gimmicks like the text Olympics
this was ok +1
back to this senseless killing, you prewrite the same old clout
I can read you like a book... rip out your spine and pages fall out!
wackness man -1

Overall your verse scored 0/20, not bad since it didn't get a score in the negatives but not good because it didn't get a score in the positives. Your rhyme scheme dope bruh, I was feeling it. Now you gotta work on the harshness of your personals, because there was a lot of dirt for you to use on him and I felt you didn't take advantage of it.

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Mimesis
I took a break for a long time, but the shit just doesn't seem to feel fair
So I'll take another one to your neck. .
. .and you can sit the next few plays out in a wheelchair
saw what you tried to do, didn't feel the harshness of it, 0
The apple doesn't fall from the tree -- I know who you're around so fuck it
We're only amazed by Bob, Eric when your faggot dads make out in public
didn't like this one -1
That shit is disgusting -- you're a lame bitch, and I'ma step to this trash
Your whole style's underhanded, so it's obvious I got a leg up in this match
this was ok but it didn't really hit hard, 0
I'm like Lebron James in the lane -- dudes just keep paying me to stroll in
But no one takes charges from lyrics. .
. .we'd rather let him keep slam dunking his bullshit
i felt the metaphor here was real weak man, -1
And you're hideous too -- I'm hot, but you could make it snow in summer
So many moles on his body they used his picture to define Avogadro's number
loll this was funny, people prob won't get it, I did, +1
That's a chemistry joke cause I'm chemically dope -- just smashin' dudes
I'll make you bail out this tourney so fast GM will come chasing after you
this wast bad, but not good imo, 0
As soon as I checked in came 200 views, dog, this nerd is just hopeless
My comeback has generated more buzz than every verse that you've posted
self glory but it was tight, +1
And that's pathetic, so take the L cause you don't belong in the top spot
You just got your ass kicked to the jump, and we ain't competing in hop scotch
thought this was weak, -1

I got your verse overall -1/20. The good thing I could say is that you were more consistent, you didn't have a lot of punches that I thought were terribly wack where as Bobericc did, while some of his others were nice. You didnt have any really bad lines, but I didn't feel you had the really good ones to take this. But it's your first battle, and I see you getting warmed up, and I think dudes should be on the look out for you cuz you'll get back to your old level real quick

v/Bobericc
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