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Old 03-11-09, 10:13 AM   #9
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Your rhymes make me laugh and your structure is wack, U don't understand....
I may not be a good "rocket", but hey, at least I can land..
I actually really liked this, needs to be reworded but I think the concept could have been dope
Cause your punches don't hit, so are you tryna be funny?
I put you down, your first round, its like Muhammad verse Sonny...
this was weak


everyone's wasting time on 'building' this guy up so please rush-in and stop it
i could just waste money?
but all n-1's attempts at liftoff are failed miserably so lets just cancel this rocket
concept was ok but your wording and structure is not
saying your the g.o.a.t and i make u laugh? plus 'my punches dont scratch'
oh well you get no pussy ever fagot, and well i can always just pickup a gat
Iv'e thought a female goat was a nanny? and punch is weak




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