Nice little story actually mate, lol. But if you managed to write 50 lines in 10 minutes flat then i'm the fucking pope! Good twist on the topic, solid vocab, rhyme, imagery, blah blah. It never ceases to impress me how much the guys i was dropping with back in the day have come on. I remember seeing that SS heavyweight medal in your avvy and my chest swelled with pride.

Cheers for the vote murdah, never mind what you said when i introduced myself, i was being an arrogant cock, lol.