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Old 03-11-09, 01:56 PM   #7
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I’m a sex god though. I go through pregnancy scares weekly at best
but I’m used to false positives.. shit, I used to be sure you were decent at text
& this battle may start as one-nick, but it’ll end with a deep cut across ya throat
shit. I’m raising funds with this beating, my fists bringing lucrative shares
beating you is such a cake walk.. I could transition into musical chairs



.vs


Quote:
All you did was complain from the moment you took over the scene
If this league is turning into such a drag…I vote you for the queen
Your quick to rudely insult and judge, and you sure are found to bitch
But I don’t see you as the mean guy, I’d place you further down the list
I’ll show you where washed ups belong, when the bait and hook falls
Cause I’ll hit N.F so hard with an L, he’ll quit rap and take up football





this was a pretty descent battle. Both had 3 quoteables in my opinion.
One way i think you started out pretty strong man, i liked most of the
beginning of your verse, but towards the end. you fell off drastically dog.
Like you went from ok punches...to statements...to just blah. For example
i thought your opener was cool. funny, and nicely worded...then like ya last
4 were just wack dog.


Quote:
Your shit bores quickly, about a quarter is what your life is worth
Your so fucking retarded it took me a long time to write this verse



^THAT was fuckin retarded lol.


Anyways, like i said i got 3 good quotes for each of you. so really this
comes down to who i think had the strongest punch...and thats one ways
opener...against nicks false positive punch...and nick took it. I thought that
shit was clever as fuck. never seen that concept before. Where as one way
you had alot of played shit in ya verse....like that closer, i've seen YOU use
that concept like every week for the past month.


anyways good battle v/nick
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