this hardcore artist claims he served hard time in incarceration
but the only bid he ever completed, was in an ebay auction
okay, decent concept but i already had a line like this and it connected way better.so i guess that means this is played.

you target audience is non existent & your aim is a little wild
you'd have me in your cross-hairs, if you groomed it once in a while
once again, decent concept but the connection was off and the delivery wasn't there...you got a lot of potential but a little rewording can do wonders for you

Its true you can get anything on Ebay if you have time to go through
but why take the days to auction and bid when two lines can own you
coo flip, the punch doesn't hit though
Your full of lies, if you got a click then they must be theiving hood rats
Your called the best crew but I dont know anything your even good at
this was forced, good personal kinda thing thought.

This was an okay battle and it was very close. I gotta give it to one way because he went after a personal, LP's punches were generic and played, still close battle though...I'll take a forced concept over a played one any day so therefore...

vote: One way

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