everyone's wasting time on 'building' this guy up so please rush-in and stop it
i could just waste money?
but all n-1's attempts at liftoff are failed miserably so lets just cancel this rocket
the flow of this is way off and the structure is weak as hell... kinda hurt just reading this... The punch was OKAY if his name was n1 and i can understand your confusing... thats the mods fault. but try to shorten ya bars up you really didnt need all those extra syllables

Your rhymes make me laugh and your structure is wack, U don't understand....
I may not be a good "rocket", but hey, at least I can land..
coo, nice flip... i kinda like it.
Cause your punches don't hit, so are you tryna be funny?
I put you down, your first round, its like Muhammad verse Sonny...
this was played and doesn't really hit hard, i felt you shoulda came harder with this bar

saying your the g.o.a.t and i make u laugh? plus 'my punches dont scratch'
oh well you get no pussy ever fagot, and well i can always just pickup a gat
okay even though this is short... this is stretched!! you have so much extra words in here that dont mean shit to the punch, take em out like a target... get short and sweet with your bars man, they easier to read like that... and regardless this punch doesn't hit

Okay i think ya'll need to focus on being short and sweet wit ya bars, theres no need for run on sentences. but The only real line i liked in this was NT first bar. soo

vote: NtT

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