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Old 03-12-09, 03:22 PM   #10
lyricalflowz
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This is a pretty close one.

Sno, You had some pretty good multis. Good wordplay, You had better structure as well. I liked your first bar better than your second bar though. Average drop.

Murdah, I like that your working on your structure some, it just makes shit easier to read. Your first bar was pretty nice, wasn't really feeling your second bar though. Overall a decent drop.

I would love to see you both use more personals in your battles. You are both pretty creative, but try to use some of that creativeness into personals.

I'd say Snocap got this by a hair, but it was pretty close.

V/ Snocap
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