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Old 03-12-09, 05:27 PM   #12
lyricalflowz
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Pretty decent battle.

One way, you came with some pretty decent stuff. I liked your first bar a good bit, Second was ehh okay I suppose. Good structure, good flow.

LP, that ebay line is hella played. Your second bar was better but still nothing to go ooo about. Overall I think if you would have had a stronger first bar you MIGHT have had a chance.

V/One Way.
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