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Old 03-12-09, 06:30 PM   #7
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You know in this bout I’m easily placing first civils really no hero,
Hes got less of a chance to make it out alive then quotable in Fly-Es verse ZERO!
hahaha, oh jesus.....it wasn't all that direct or personal and wasn't worded perfectly but I laughed, no offence to them lol
He’s the mod of the tourny, but his skills are no were near major,
In reality Civil couldn’t punch lines sparring with graph paper.
wasn't feeling this
Civil nice? PLEASE, watch as with ease Mega wreck's this bitch,
Yah he's got control of this battle......cus of his modding privileges.
this was weak, I always expect a mod punch against a mod
I don’t know what you see in your girl shes hit n u can’t beg the differ,
Cus I saw his chick through Civilize and I still wanted to brown bag her.
this was ok, but wording took away from it
Punches take his head for a spin cus Mega IS destined to win,
It doesn’t make cents that ur givin out money for a tourny ur no longer in.
lol, this was ok, the sense thing was unessesary though didn't realy do anythinhg
He throws all this money around so people will vote n post verses,
Cus that’s the only way he gets girls but really this man’s game is worthless.
na
He’s stressing the match all week - I’m still gonna have to give u this bruising,
for chicking in he’s a 'bold man,' but hair isn’t the only thing your gona be losing.
doesn't really even sound the same bald and bold
Look dawg your always dropin played n lame all your concepts are plain,
I just can’t help it every time I read one of your verse I go down memory lane.
your played punches are played, especially in the last week
He'll be in the other section of the tourny after Mega completes this defeat,
You’re not in the Jump rope this week but my punches still take em of his feet.
I don't see where rope comes from or fits in there except for the end, really forced
He's from the Garden City we could do this on his turf n he still wouldn’t survive,
Cus I'll just stomp him in the ground,
Weak bitch couldn’t push up the daisies cus he was buried alive.
na




Mega types raw? Shiiit, it'd be betta if you didn't write at all
I'm the one with the head ache' now, why u bangin ya head against the wall?
this was ok, worded bad though....I liked the concept though
Snap ya legs n then ya jaw. dawg... i'd really have u feelin that shit
and i'm surprised as much as u like to go raw, that u still dont have a kid
again the concept was cool, but delivery took away from the effect
Or even hiv. Maybe, s'cuz you STILL dont have a bitch. wack nigga get a clue.
we all know u aignt the type to like kids...cuz they act bigga than you do
na
Got you chokin like you a smoker, but cigs definately one w/ alot of 'types'
Thats why, the only thing i know about mega.... is he HELLA ultra light
this was ok, but didn't really hit
Is ultra stronger than mega or mega stronger than ultra? Faggish lard, its ova
I know you got ya gay spirit up! but i'm not the type to walk arms around the shoulda
na
He love watchin men grapple. And honestly i don't like ya RAW fiasco.
But dude! It seems like you talk about dick n men, in every battle
wasn't too hard
Type thats mega gay, kid.... mega lame. You can't 'write' in the left lane drive slow
I could check in with NO LINKS, and still beat you w/ the ammount of votes
this is kinda braggish as much as it is a punch
And i KNOW that its in me...
....But i dont know if i should go or even throw down 20. that'd kill this kid today.
thats why i put the jump in front of you, cuz i knew you'd try n lead the way
lol, this was on of the better jump lines



this was a close battle, a few nice concepts all around, but wording seemed to be the problem, I have civil with one more decent line then mega also found his concepts more creative, but both of you need to beef your lines up with structure and wording.
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