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Old 03-12-09, 07:48 PM   #13
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From: The Wu
IP:

I'm wild like rabies, even in the 80s I was sendin kids to hades...
So MurDaH gonna die before he make it big like aborted babies!!
SnoCap-
This was the most decent one in the battle though, but it coulda been better then just abortion and dont use exclamation, it looks kinda childish..

Dood is wack and shit, This fools gay, all his bars lackin wit...
stop actin bitch, The only "Kool aid" he need is a fashion tip!!
not really feelin it, it wasnt much of a punch, kinda of a statement, again..the exclamations

Murder-

I see this be MurDer, i predicted it in the 'War-I-Wrote'
so after this, only way we see "SNOCAP SIGN" is throu a 'HOROSCOPE'...
good attempt, but it didnt hit hard, good structure though

stop thinking ya bars are golden cuz ya not payed, droping trash every-where like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz after this post u'll be un-able to fight back like you got Aids.......
not good structure and extremley strectched, shorten it and try to get your point across with fewer words, do both at the same time, other than that, it was mediocure at best

This battle was nothin special, but i felt as though snocap took this by a very tiny margin, because of his first punch, but both of you guys keep on workin, im just learnin too

Vote- Snocap
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