oneway- where the multis were, were nice, and the flow i could ride with. originality wasn't all there, but I liked where you took the piece, it was quick paced, and the imagery you used was pretty tight. with how you described stan acting in the beginning i wasn't sure where he was ready to go to, but it came out pretty dope. getting in the car crash I would've liked to know more, but saying that one line at the end. the people who saved him must've been bullshit. lol

Alpha- LOL idk what to think of your piece man, it was crazy creative. I'm guessing the money reeled in for the man who 'created' cocaine. it was hilarious when dude asked for the cut he gave to shorty back. but who knew what he thought could make the world a better place ended up fucking with his own mind. what struck me as even more crazy is she understood why he took the money back and asked him to split the goods. haha flow was cool, but I liked where you took the topic. funny shit man

v/Alpha