your bars are old like alkatraz cells
this shit don't fiz me like flat pop


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that is a played old style, every single metaphore has been done somewhere at sometime, and thats all you seem to write, it doesn't get props now adays in punchline battles, chino xl is even fallen off...... you really have to understand that.

and we all see your multis but that doesn't change the fact that your lines are too long, you can still use multis,


you aint golden, ya not payed, You throw trash around like u got maids
even M.T.V know urs not 'Made' cuz you can't fight back like you got Aids


its the exact same line you wrote but it flows better and comes across easier and I still used the multis......this is something you can easily fix yourself but you refuse to take anyones advice.....no one beefs with you dude.

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