oneway- dope. You took an original take on your topic and brought it to life with consistently strong vocab and a great rhyme scheme which rarely seemed forced. The vocab was at the right level throughout which made for smooth reading and the plot twist near the end was a great addition to the story, the repetition of the 'i'm an alcoholic' line was a nice touch as well. Good work.

Alpha- The drug-related piece was a nice tie-in with the picture you chose to represent, you laced this with a good flow, vocab and rhyme scheme, but in terms of story progression and imagery this felt a little too vague for most of the piece for me. It seemed like you were throwing 'blanket' details over your narrators feels instead of really getting to the meat of the story. The imagery WAS strong in places, but i had to work hard to keep my attention on this piece until the end.

Vote- oneway, better imagery and a better take on his topic.