opposing me's stupid, your whole brand is dimmwited
cuz your stamp of approval, has the word dumbass printed in it
B.E.S.T. bashes dudes...so what women have you kept
when oppurtunity knocks, ya wife strips on my doorstep


vs



make this bitch shout, cuz i got jokes in more ways
to fucking clown you, you'll get a standing ovation
....from pies at your face!


Both need to work on wording. lp you did a bit better this week.
keep focusing on directing your concepts though, Compa...idk
what was up with this verse. alot of statements, no real punches
i just picked the bar that showed the most potential, but it really
isnt quoteable material. you didnt have anything harsh. compa 1 thing
i want you to remember...dick jokes...penis lines...gay lines..and lines
talkin about dudes girl n shit. all those are played useless. and in general
almost always turn out wack. so just drop any of those kind of concepts
you think about. both of you need fresh ideas. dont use that dumb shit

v.lp

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