New Jack
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IP:
His got trashy lyrics and all his concepts are played
and really..the only thing positive about him is aids
this was basic, wordplay barely descent
You wont win this battle so its clear youd better bounce
hell i'll even attack you with letters just to spell it out
this was descent and a bit funny
and doesnt hurt to know that i'll crush this persons soul
he should keep his rhymes from this world, hip hop birth control
not feeling this line
im as tight as hell, rhymes blow ya brain your mind will swell
your inclined to fail..they say only time will tell
i dont feel like this was a direct hit
So I might as well..let him know he'll never get the title belt
Even if he "drops once a month" with more lines to sell
Nah
i'll beat his ass "period" just to show that this guys a girl
So watch his record stay below 0 like it was minus twelve
Nah
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Your verse was mediocre. You have room for improvement, but you did okay for this match. Work on better personals and your creativity level and you'll do fine in the league.
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LPMNDCTE
The B.E.S.T. Crew
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