haha, very nice read.

I liked the ending, it was pretty funny.

Good storyline, good take on the topic.
Blame it on the alllcooholl.
If you had just smoked bud you would've been fine,
and could've told the wife what's up.

Good piece overall, would've been a good battle if he showed.

Favorite lines:

Slipped by the liquor store, spend a pretty penny on some
Patron with lime, a fifth of whiskey, a little henny & rum...
For some reason they wanted a hotel, so we got a suite
so I sit back, kick back my feet & treat myself to a drink
Two weeks later, my lips look like the toppings off a pizza
Found out she died later that night, the bitch's name was Lisa.
then we talked out, she cheated on me with some random guy
apparently I wasn't the only member of our family with a crazy night.
Then we hit the bed for one last time, there wasn't a chance
cuz I saw the same shit that's on my lip when I pulled down her pants...