I was feeling ti civil, the message was cool and I liked how it flowed, played a picture well, the only thing I could say is that the wording seems a little weak and on a average level, I think you can do better that wise....


I was also feeling your nt, it was dope the story flowed well and played in my mind as I read it, but it also seems you can up your wording style and vocab for more effect, still liked it though

It was close Ima say they both came at it well and their stories reached, but Ima have to say NT, his story was a little more entertaining and kept me into it.

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