JTR, that was ok, it was kinda basic and simple but told the story well, I kinda found it a little boring though, just not my kinda story I guess. You could definitly beek up your style more effects and better wording would help alot....stil dope tough


Bob, I was really diggin this, the vocab was dope, but was a little hard to flow with sometimes, the story was cool, I had to read it a few times to fully get your peice though, but I was digging it, but it did seem to stall in places like you were spending too much time on one thing but not enough on another, I was kinda predicting the ending though about half way through....also dope though


This is a close one both came at it well bob had a better chioce of vocab and creativity but JTR had the consise story line with a personal emotional edge, but I think ima say bob with his creativity and complexity.

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