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Old 03-15-09, 05:42 PM   #11
Wordz AhGod
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Fake fuck, g'luck what? in the jump, i'll make him one and done
N we didn't need a gimmik, becuase we all know Killa'z is one
this line was weak, the punch was too obviouse and direct and lacked wit
Wow n look at this, Stubb's must be pissed, i musta took a dive
Cuz after i run through his name it just prove GK's still from 05
same here
N if you read the rules correct, which i barely had done yet
I'd post a link to your picture but your signature sums it up best
I get the concept but the wording felt way off here.
My punches building in force, knowin whats in store is jsut scaryin ya
Cuz his all his rap bridges collaposed like most of North America's
didn't see the punch here
N your right, on the mic you number one...and you also number 2
Only because no one's close to sucking that bad and wanting to battle you
lacked creativity
Stubb's next time give me some competetion, i'm pleading, just listen
I think we'd all enjoy a battle, were you see someone other than me just dissing
cool but could have been better

I think its safe to say this felt like a no show verse, not saying that it was but it felt like one. Coke, you should work on how you word your punches around your concepts. Some of your concepts have been done on Gkillaz before such as the sig punch. Not the worst Ive read but it is from you so step it up next week man.
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