johnny- it was a dope little drop. its kind of how i was thinking of doing that topic if i did it, good thing i didnt though lol. I liked the approach a lot, mad hype in intensity. i've seen you do better but this is still one of those pieces that set the caliber. cool imagery, sort of straightfoward but had a pretty nice flow too.

Murdah- thats whats up, at some points the flow was decent, and you had some more creative wordchoices and multis than usual, actually holding your storyline. the read seems to progress well, but the idea just seemed generic to me. but props for really having my interest at times. your shaping up.

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