text.even geico can do it
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fuck- I wasn't really feeling the intro, but the scenerio is imaginable and everything, just should have been flowed out by itself i think. there were a couple of dope bars in the verse, and you were able to describe being institutionalized pretty well, no one really used this topic this week. some deep views, I think you should've spiced the flow up though and added a bit more imagery imo. cool drop
Alpha- hahaha, dope shit man. a crazy killer lost in a never ending cycle of chaos and murder. yes yes I was liking the flow, the depth and drama of the piece and where you took the topic, it was very creative. I see you becoming more and more of a threat man, at first I honestly didnt know how to take the twist at the end.. good drop
v/alpha
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