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Old 03-27-09, 11:49 PM   #7
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ima judging this guy is weak so ima snap him like a pencil
This is the court of law anything you say can and will be used against you

(played concept, but cool flip)

His songs are trash,the type that never plays in your head
So like spiderman His music will only ever "stay on the web"

(cool concept, needed different wording.)



vs



camarac is tasteless so please watch as I'm just bashin' his face in -
cam'd have some sexy thoughts in his head if he had arac to replace his...

(Decent)

your internet - you're scared n' shit and its obvious your shit is really soft
you couldn't dot COM cuz he knocked you out 2nd round of the playoffs.

(Alright personal, could've been worded better.)

this is jon, you'd be wrong to think i'm the one you'll be shittin' on;
cuz the chances of you winnin's like the tournys chance of livin' on.

(Lol, decent)



Cam - you had a few good lines, a couple cool flips, but you also had a couple fillers and lines i wasn't feelin all the much.

Jon - Not bad at all, a couple cool punches. You did have a couple ones i didn't like all that much as well, but you had the more enjoyable verse overall.


Vote - Jonathan
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