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Old 03-29-09, 04:22 PM   #8
JTR
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I'll take a gamble with this, you should stop fucking with text
your garbage at best, 'cause its alpha, when I'm dropping a bet
ok wordplay, bad punch
but your not winning this, like a parking lot where your stopping
after I kick your lips on your whip, I'm stomping your car kiss
Son, it's "YOU'RE" lmao. Anyways cool wordplay, shoulda worded it better, I almost gave you a point for this but it's not hard enough
sparring with alpha's, and so as far as fists in this fighting goes
your loss is more anticipated than nick with his recyclables
lol these types of lines make me laugh, I used one similair in a league, it was better then this one though . +1 for this
distressed in a vital call, with civil's certainty, damn depressing,
your the type to get disconnected in an emergency, then arrested..
not feeling this
your a bitch, confess this, a rotten pussy who thinks it's excellent
you aint better, and I aint talking 8 letters when he's going F to M
lol almost didn't quote this, but you know what it's kinda cool, +2
I step on heads... and in this quick debate, your a big disgrace
and don't act like you can't get 50 too...the money for SECOND PLACE!
blah
I've been your weight, but now I bomb those punches you throw short
I'd come with bio weapons, theres just not much about you I can blow up
kinda played concept, the wording was original, but not hard
but your personals I know suck! I got mad raps, that come and come back
your a dumb fag and your verses sure be more half assed than one's mag
lol @ this, funny +3
my verse is where the funs at, read and pass it on to the next herb
while your concepts are running dryer than a marathon in the desert
LOL ILL! +4
I abducted some martians, your tied up, guess who ima set it on?
and by the way all them alienate, your not going to be left alone
nah

vs.

Nick fletcher whored you last week, but you won it's true
so just keep doin ya thing Bob...
....AKA pray I'm recyclin too
loolll, ill +1
Fool, you can't match my heat, I know your ready to perspire
and all good things come to an end...
...which explains why U havn't retired
lol I have a strong feeling this is played as fuck, but I can't recall ever seeing it, so +2
And you try to think deep, but tacklin me? place ya bets
Cuz on the site bob's the Sophist..
..at both topicals n text
weak
You need weed, butfuck dude, just take ya bitch and pound her
Bob takes so many dicks in the ass if hes feelin straight its a downer
meh
and ya bullshit dude, how you gonna pass the facts ya writen?
Cuz if Bob's punches are profound, it just means hes back to biten
this is played, I used this concept, better, back when it was actually original
ya chick love's my dick, im blunt so i'll be straight nd scary
I cant beat around the bush, cuz ya bitches pussy too hairy
lol wack
and speakin of her dude, your ugly, how'd u get in her pants?
& i know love is blind but im STILL surprised your gettin a chance
this was aight, but not good enough to be quoted
your stupid fam, but i know u hunger to win with every breath
I'd give Bob food for thought.. but he'd end up starvin to death
this was cool, +3
And Bob quit school, yep the truth leaves ya brain fondled
So now hes drinkin coffee cuz university at Mcdonald's
bad
& My sense of humor is fine son, it's just you ain't dope
BUT i decided NOT to let you in the crew.. since I can't take a joke
fucking played

blah @ this battle, honetly when Boberric said "i'm going beast mode" I had a smile on my face and was like nice, this shit is gonna be a good battle, but nah, you shouldn't have said that, cuz you gave off the wrong impression, and hyped yourself too much. You guys went way too many lines cuz you had mad filler, you both need to work on your wording eh, Bob your wordplay creativity is cool, but it's not hard, you gotta work that shit into a hard punch, take more time with it. Same with you alpha, and be more original and creative, stop using played punches. There were a couple of lines however that were dope, like that recylcing shit alpha said, and that running dry shit bob said, those were cool. Check it out though Alpha, I really thought you'd win cuz your verse started off with 2 points off the bat, that's ill. But you really fell off and only got one more point for the rest of your verse after that... you coulda win with just a lil more effort

In the end I got this at 4-3 for bob, pretty close

v/bob
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