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Old 04-04-09, 09:35 PM   #10
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ok this was anice decent battle from both guys man so props on that....loved the different approaches.

JTR
Flow- was on point and i liked how it stayed in a nice rhytmn. it didnt get off tune or what not with shit man and it was nicely done with ease. it had a nice bounce to it dude... and i liked the content within the written.
Story- was a nice touch aswell something like a text self glory and what not nah mean... but it was still a nice touch.

COKE
Flow- was kind of choppy and drifted off key a tad bit sorry to say but it picked up later on dude and so props on that shit nah mean.
Story- dude was a nice fuckin illy touch man... i think your story was the better out of the two.

the first approach was more political and economic wise and the other was a great tease and what not but i have to go with JTR for more creative reasons on his lines great job guys thanks for droppin by the way
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