bob- Liked it, you brought all these sugar junkie images and mixed them up with a homicidal man's story and kept it moving to the end. I'd say once or twice your style got a little too fractured and disjointed for easy reading but it was dope overall.

NT- Came off as an intelligently written ramble about the creativity process. There were several good one-liners and good points you made through this. Rhyme scheme could've been stronger but that wasn't really an issue. Can't really say much else about this one.

Vote- Bob, good battle, i give it bob for more creativity and progression in his piece.