These were to very good pieces that both brought up somewhat of the same topic...

Johnny- I liked your drop a lot, You played it out like a reminiscing story and you kept right on the point of your drop all the way through and it flowed pretty nicely, although there were some parts where it was a little choppy but that is not a huge concern. You had some good vocab and nice multi's for a solid story, good work


Alpha- You also had a nice topical about addiction, you had some good vocab, but I felt as though you used some vocab that wasn't really need/didn't fit well with some lines. But likewise, it was a minor detail. You used good imagery for your verse which I could picture easily about what was goin on in that man's (or woman's) life. Nice job.


This was a preet good battle and the choice is pretty tough, but I'm gunna give it to johnny because i thought his was more clear and to the point, but also had a better central view of his topic...nice job to both of ya's..

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