v/ oneway...you had a better overall piece, good work

acually i'll just give you some feed, you shouldnt dropped somethin without it gettin noticed so...

I liked your piece a lot, It sent a message that really hit home for me, and that is that music can literally cure all times of struggle and hardship, hopefully everyone will recognize and see eye to eye on this view, and for the verse itself it had some nice rhyme scheme and word play and it flowed nice all the way to the end, I also think that in this type of work the vocab couldve been better at some parts to make this drop really stand out. But overall good job, I appreciate this view because I believe in it as well, music can alter moves and talk to you....
its a shame that this piece wasnt played against but I kinda expected murder to show up but whatever, good job.

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Although these words, DIG, DEEP
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