Bob had a basic story written in a complex and abstract way, while NT had a complex and abstract story... written in a basic way. Bobs was real cool and really well written, I liked the connections to his sugar addiction during his carnage spee, the way it was written was dope and the rhyme scheme was pretty sick, i felt this was on point, as for NT you went with a cool unique style but I didnt feel it hit at all, you need more practice with this kind of thing, you have to actually be abstract on similair topics not multiple random topics

v/Bob

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