View Single Post
Old 03-23-03, 03:51 PM   #5
Baysick
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

Aight X got this...

Chop-you came nice and original, you need a different style I think cuz im not sure what words yur rhymin sometimes and the flow gets fucked up, maybe just try regulars line... verse was nice, decent punches all around..flow was shaky but it was a decent drop..just not quite hard enough...

X your either a newbie or a cat whose lame...you had a couple lines that got it for you but shit man, some of your lines were soooo played... Defeet lines are like so played out its not funny.. that hold your breathe is played and that downy shit is played, but you did have some nice original punches so Ima give this battle to you... your flow is terrible tho.. that sepparation between lines is not needed makes it difficult to read and you need to even out your bars more..

X gets this, but it was close..

eD