ok...
you both came really simple....


dabattleman...
you gonna need alot more practice, juss ma opinion...
cuz if you think about what you wrote...
couldnt anyone writes thos...
it aint nuttin special, naw wut i mean...


Qiul-Spit....
your flow had longer bars wit betta punches....
but pretty simplistic....

vote=Qiul


do me a fav., peeps are sleepin on r.b......hit up a vote...
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