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Old 04-30-09, 03:25 PM   #13
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calm down my young friend heres the vote...

You need to learn how to rap, study is better
Your verses are a Clump of lard... like the nutty proffesor
Plus ya girls pussy had sooooooooo much hair and stank lethal
When I took off her thong I got scared & ran from the fuzz like black people
No racist!
I'm a great Chef, rapping with a spatula and making you play dead
Cuz it's over easy to cook this guy when I crack his egg head
Familly jewels? You aint never had a bitch play with yo treasure
Cuz no girl wants to FM like they enjoy AM radio better
Wack rapper, you couldn't handle the ripper
A fan of your raps? Hahahaha, we'd rather be a fan of the Clipper's
Damage the critics, you don't kiss a crotch or get a muff in ya mouth
If you ever tried to give a girl a locust you'd just end up buggin her out
That means his girl is unsatisfied, jack deprived of flawless eatin
An she's never been gladheateher like Romans fighting in the Coliseum
I got the best writtens, fans love me cuz my text rippin
When it comes to One Way?
I didn't know it was possible to be liked less than Meg Griffin
Your head splittin, no chicks would get with him and my flow's better
Fuckin virgin, I can tell that unisexe like hair dressers that style both genders
Lemme get scientific, this pedophile travels coast to coast
In hopes he can catch a buoyancy his privates cuz that's what floats

thought you would have come more harder a few good punches, the gladheateher punch was definatly the best in there for me.the only thing that was missing was hard hitting personals which would have made this!

vs

When Jack gets women they seem to all resemble Pewee Herman
Don’t matter, his dick is so small he has sex but remains a virgin
He’s a spineless herb, I don’t take him as someone that can hurt me
I wouldn’t expect to see J son unless it was around Friday the 13th
It makes me laugh how this fuck is still gloating like he’s dope
Even I know we’re only here because this tourney was a joke
Call me a ninja, cause I’m bred to kill samurais if you ask me
Last time you were in reach of the belt, your got your ass beat
You’re a homo in hip hop dude, so really you aint stressing me
There’s only one thing harmful about you, and that’s your std’s
Well it’s going to be a wake up can when he fails to drift by me
But how dope can he possibly be to advertise a battle with fly-E
Growing up for Jack meant coming out of the closet, as a gay
Jack in a box?…..something you don’t see too much now adays
His trash talk is irrelevant, cause he aint been swift from the start
He’s a bit rough around the edges, even more so after I rip him apart
He’s a scam with weak lines, it takes him days to prepare such
The last time he went off the top, was his forced army haircut
This kid trying to sound smart only leads to Hysterical laughing
He’s such a stupid bitch
………… he could give speeches for miss America pageants

a good all round verse,but some punches not as hard as they could have been.but this was backed up with some real nice personals.the best ones were the ninja one and the fly e one.

to say this was a final it wasnt the best ive seen thought JTR could have come wayyyy harder cuz ive seen him do it before.just lacked a little.

v/one way
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