Beat is aight..Comin in, ya flow is kinda slow but goes decently with beat...lyrics are above average, pretty emotional track...hook is decent...your presentation needs work and ya flow could be better...you over exagerate your words a lil too much, all good tho..just work on your delivery lyrics were pretty nice .. decent drop man...props to ya.. always elevate..Peep my track if you can..

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