I like the hook.
what beat is this?

also..
your flow is a little boring.
but i like the overall feel of it.

just need to be more comfortable it seems.
cuz your presence overall is like your reading it with a little attitude.
get to the poitn where it sounds like your just doing it natural.

good beat though.
good flow to it.
just work on uppin the energy/attitude.

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