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Old 05-22-09, 05:39 AM   #6
MurDaH187
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This could of been way better, pretty short to the flow was decent vocab is ok at best the concept isn't original I feel you could of expanded your flow and your ideas better this also could of been a collabo and it would of made it better for this type of short verse none the less am a pot head so I flet centine part but touch up a bit on everything and keep droping them
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