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Old 03-23-03, 10:27 PM   #3
Orikle
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Yo pac, this shit is deep, I'm sure most can realte to this shit, most cats lost someone close to em, can't disagree with anything written from the heart yo, but on a rappin level it was not bad, yo rhmed very well in the big/main verse but then u lost the rhymes a little in the 3rd verse, anyway dogg, its nice, keep it up!

Peace Out Yo!!!!
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