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lmfao!!! i just listened to this..
one of the gayest attempts at rap ive ever heard... you desperatly need to project your voice a lot more so it doesent sound like your reading.. make your lyrics flow a lot more aswell, at the moment your writing them very boxed in with no switches to your bar structure... try and put atleast a little bit of melody in the way you rap... put your rapper voice on man and try to rhyme a lot more.......
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