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Old 03-24-03, 04:49 AM   #15
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lol @ the beat you used biggie ripped though that beat

delivery was solid yo the quailty is decent the rhyme scheme is sold some polishing wouldn't hurt, the singing was kinda was good a litt;le off key @ spots but overall nice singing

2 verse is cool yo your going a little too fast and some adlbs are off with fucks up flow conisistancy you know what I mean

decent shit though gonz
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