Yeah it's slightly better than your last post, yo just have to stop usin "Preschool rhymes" like :

i anit no gangsta just some craker from a but fuck town//

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to come off the set and show you guys what a kid from nowere can do//
with my mom in the kitchen cooking some stew//
looking at the list of shit i have to do.

Man like look a the words yo have used, u need to expand your vocabulary alot which means learning and using bigger words and don't rhyme with such simple words aswell. At the start it didn't rhyme at all so try and make it rhyme the whole way through with a consistent rhyme scheme!!
Just helpin yo out dogg...

Peace out Yo!!!

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