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Old 03-24-03, 10:02 AM   #4
MeNTiLL
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This was dope Lowd...And this is an ill example of how illness get's slept on...LoL...

But I liked tha rhymin' in this piece man...It flowed good from beginin' to tha end...I liked tha story and tha way U wrote it...
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My rights have left me out of breath, with this one set,
of eyes, bloodshot, unable to cry for my own death .
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That was dope right there...Those bars stuck out to me...But keep writin' man...Peace
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