Whys That?
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IP:
I enjoyed the read!
Could of been a bit longer and dug into the depths of the peice. But it was still a good read. Your vocab is decent, nothing mind blowing, but for a brainless audience I guess it pays to dumb it down. lol. rhymes are simple. Structure is on point and the peice flows nice.
Best Line
Isolated freedom distorts my vision & breathing
under lock & key so long my hairline's reseeding
Best Rhyme
Breathing ... Reseeding
Worst line
technological advices ensure I detail a plan B & C
bashing my fist against the wall like I'm using T n T
Worst rhyme
B & C ... T & T
Stay dropping
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