Originally Posted by JP Morgan

the hook is dope because its explaining a simple concept from the bible in a creative enough way for people to know that you are talented and its not puttin too much of your corny opinions behind it. if you only did that all the time i would love your music, but when you "try" to be creative you are simply straying way from the meassege, which is just your ego getting the best of you thinking that you know better than God. all wordplay and metaphors must be directly related to the idea's of the bible or you are just another homo- no pun inteded
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you need to get your rules fixed as well because they controdict the bible. it says no where in the bible that opertunities don't knock twice, the concept you are messing up is that you can always make it, it is simply a decision in your mind to quit being a bitch, opertunities never knock twice, you can't say that and truely believe that God forgives but if you believe God forgives, opertunity knocks every second of every day no matter how far off you are from the way you should be living.
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if you aren't thinking of God and the bible in every concept and line, it will come back to bite you in the ass and you will sound like an idiot and leave a lot of chinks in your armer like JTR, haha