This thread needs so so much work. Here are some things that ruined it.

"hope she invites me up for coffee and maybe a taste//
Sure ill come up u wanna race//
man that was stupid, i feel like a disgrace//"

Crying and then racing---how old are you guys


I ran so fast i felt like my feet were shootin guns//
As we walked through the door//
she says "I feel like a whore"//
Maybe we shouldnt do this//
I made a chance move and gave her a kiss//
she kissed me back//
we hit the sack//
she even let me hit it from the back//
now I lay here in silence with her on my shoulder//
should i try to make this work or make the bed a lil colder'//

This whole ending really was to elementary--More practice is needed i guess---elevate

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