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Old 01-11-10, 07:11 PM   #3
M&rk
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i like the song but i dont really like ya'lls tone on it, second dude for sure tryin to sound like things are funny, really corny to me, along wit your tone on the hook
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i like your tone on your verse cuz its more serious, but i dont like the adlibs. what you're tryin to get across isn't funny yet the song comes across as like its jokin around. maybe thats what you're tryin to do, but i like to be serious on serious topics
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sounds like a good track though if i weren't so anal, no homo
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