^^^ people are busy with other things you know... this piece isnt exactly like the center of the universe... be patient and up it everytime it fades off the front page until you get what you feel is enough comments... now onto your rhyme...
Quote:
its like im movin forward,yet in a state of regression
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that line was cool... could have worded it better though... sorta like
i'm progressin in regression
but whatever you feel like sounds better... this was alright... even though i didnt get the shade tree thing at the end... where did that come from? i give this a 6/10 the only things bad was the ending (the tree thing and the flow just fell off)... keep rhymin
^^^ enough to satisfy you??