you sound like you're just talking... put some "oomph" into it... sound like you one piiiiiissed off mofo or having fun... depends what message you're tryin to send... drop me a pm with links to your next audio that you do and i'll check it and tell ya if you've improved... and dont worry about sounding stupid or anything... cause thats what i think is hoding you back... well thats what stops me from doing audio and dishing it out on the net... anyways keep rhymin