Content easy man---I put my version up only to guide not to show difference between good and bad. I study the dictionary to help my knowledge on vocabulary arts. His vocab was not what i was pertaining to--it was his choice of words that really turned off the emotion. such as

"she kissed me back//
we hit the sack//
she even let me hit it from the back//"

If you disagree well then i dont respect you as a writer. Dont label me as anyone cause you dont know me--smart person--Alright Gran no hate man just keep it coming and i'll keep reading.

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