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Old 03-25-03, 07:30 PM   #6
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Originally posted by The Root
were is the emotion yo...shit sounds dead kinda to me...the beat is coo..kinda simple and repetative, the concept i can relate too and im sure some other cats can too...first verse is dull to me,voice is aight, second verse a lil better w/the emotion,voice is coo,third and 4th verse im feeling, they have more emotion....the plot is dope, i think you coulda rocked this a lil better but its not all that bad..just needs more emotion yo......hook was aight kinda boring.....fuck i forgot what i was gonna say, anyways this was aight...keep it up

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Pretty much... plus... whoever mastered this... BLAH... gotta get some better equipment or steal a better program... yo... dunny the whole song should be re-done... yall don't even really sound good on the beat... meaning... it's not for you... from first to last verse... it's pretty boring... sorry...



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