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Old 03-25-03, 08:33 PM   #8
OneShotHit
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Haha

Yo, im sorry im an elite, fo delight, ya rhymes is re-writes
ya spend mo time on dis site, then no armed retards flyn 3 kites\
its pitful, he a grown ass man, and spends his fridays copy-and-pastn lyrics\
Ya rhymes wus "shockingly" weak, all i heard wus "clear" it\
Every line u wrote, wus similar to the on above, i couldn't feel ya lyrics if ya title wus called "push-and-shove"\
His hostility, seem to get in the way of his weak ability
Even though my crew is KILL, but damn nigga u killn me\
Im only a minor, and yet im past ya level mentaly and lyricaly
I'll have ya boys dis sayn "one shot, got u criticly"\
Hes a lame, he looked at my profile, seein what he could post
"A toast!" to this man, good job, u almost came close\
I take u as a joke, ya lyrics, were already spoke, U jus an 8mile reject whos mad cuz on stage, he choked\
From da start i already knew dis hoe wus done
He wus sayn gay a lot, i see wut he likes fo fun\
If his nightmare, is 2guys fuckn, why wus he thinkn of dat shit in da 1st place\
U a menacy to society, only juice u drink has that dick taste\
I can write betta lyrics then u, wit no hand and one finger
Even Timberlake comes harder den u, and he a boy-band singer\

Ima end my shit, cuz iknow my peoples don't like'em long
Unlike u, u jus anotha sisqo-rappa, but u thinkn bout niggas in thongs\

Peace