Innocent intentions with great exausperation. That's what I got outta your peice.

I can feel this. I'm assuming the capitol letters are habitual. But the cutting off I can see from a more artistic point of veiw. Anyway, this was straight up raw meat of poetry.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.